you want me to explain why i hate you
after all my distress, i could never date you
you're your own man now
so boy, i never made you
it took for me to leave you
to even try to phase you
and this is just a phase
i wasted all these days now
praying you would change
embarrassment i couldn't live down
i gave my time and cared for you
thank GOD, i never married you
dug a grave with room for two
All I ask for is constructive criticism
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WOW! It seems like someone has taking you through some heavy HEAVY trials. That last line has me shook! This write is so real I can feel it. Are you going to finish it?
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