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Don't Go Quietly

Make me write this over and over
You are a lot like me
And grasping at straws

When this all happens according to plan
Who will stop the rain?
Because we have no sense of direction
Train tickets with a destination shan't help

While I have the strength to raise a hand
I should just hitch-hike from your heart
"Call me, drop me a line..."
"Don't go quietly"

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  • Ajdmommy silver member
    November 26, 2009
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    Yes drop a line.. lots of people leave without saying anything.

  • Michael P
    September 30, 2009
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    I loved this-the last verse was nothing short of excellent@