Like a rose this love of ours has grown.
A reddest of roses this worlds ever known.
So slowly it grew,
Broke up from the ground.
An untamed rose,
Unlike all around.
Slowly, yet surely, it continues to bloom.
Smelling so nice, like a lovely perfume.
We planted this bulb,
Our bond was a power.
This rose started a seed,
Blossomed into a flower.
With you as the petals and me as the spine.
The two form one: souls intertwined.
The thorns will grow,
But onward we move.
Through the tests of time,
Our love we will prove.
A rosebush needs water: water to be.
You are my only, a water to me.
As this rose ages,
The petals reach for the sky.
This rose shall grow on,
And never shall die.
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A rosebush needs water: water to be.
You are my only, a water to me.
As this rose ages,
The petals reach for the sky.
This rose shall grow on,
And never shall die.
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I really enjoyed this thank you so much for sharing. Man this was great.. Thank you so much for entering and keep up the good work!!! Good luck!!!
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Obviously this girl had no clue what she had. Very sweet and emotional piece here. You layed your soul out to this girl. Powerful. Thanks for entering the contest with this piece.
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In answer to the poem and your author comments, remember, every rose has it's thorns! This was written so awesomely. I loved your rhythm to this, too!
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I must say I really loved this poem. It was amazingly beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing. I can't wait to read more of you in the future. If you need help getting around the site please IM me.
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