I just want to wrap my arms around you
Be close to your lean body
I just want to press my lips against yours
And feel the way you're on me
I just want to see all ofyou
and all you have to give
I just want to be with you in a simple way
to see two spirits live.
I just want to dance with you in pleasure
The way we dance in rage
I want you to dig for last ing treasure
And feel the way I flip your page
I just want to show my love
and you to show me yours
I just want to fly so high above
That we are always sure.
Author notes
My first attempt at an erotic poem...was it any good?
What did you think
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nice, but not erotic
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Sorry
this is good love poetry but i didn't get erotic out of it. But then what do I know I don't believe in love much anymore. And erotic is not my style, I like it for what it is. A love poem.....chael
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Thank you for your comments. I'm trying to write erotica because it's hard for me, and I love to feel passion. Why don't you believe in love anymore? There is so much in this world left to love.
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crimson boy
it was good wasnt erotic really, it seems more like a love poem more than anything but its really good just needs more hot steamy to go with the sweet ya know
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