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Hurting me

I say ill forget you
pretend it never happened
but its getting harder to breath
I feel that familiar sense of pressure
as it builds up
gaining its momentum
before it hits the top
exploding from me
into a new depression stage

my depression
will be my revenge
to deal with your
betrayal

my best friends
are there for me
my sisters
are there for me
I am an emo bastard
sure
but im a cute and cuddly
emo bastard
and you have lost that part of me

if i cut
i bleed
if i cut
i cry
if i cut
i die
but i wont do that
i have done that in the past
for a girl
its not worth it
i wont defy myself
because you were a bitch
i cared for you
even though i said
i didn't as much

now i sit here
listening to my music
thinking
of what the hell
i did to deserve the pain i have
i am me
and if you don't like that
I'm sorry

you were told i would wait
2 weeks
to kiss you in public
Public
Displays
of Affection
I need to be comfortable
with you first

in public
but you didn't want to wait
for that
that's your problem

you had no right
to be angry with me
for hanging out with my best friend
when i sit there
and watch you
play with other guys
hands
I don't get angry
maybe I should have

so time to move on
done.
I have already
I'm pretending it never happened
I'm not going to hurt myself

and cut my wrists
because you were a bitch.

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Nice read.

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  • Jazzlyn
    June 9

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    I already said I loved this poem
    just put that I have permission to use it in my project in the AN and thats it

  • it was great

    aaaaaaaaaa i loved it reallly great write and what a fucking bitch your better off with out her

  • wow, she is mean. good job though

  • d a m n awsome, stab to the side!

  • Awe, this is heart breaking and sad. I know how it feels to be betrayed and hurt. I can relate so well to this piece. You did a great job pouring and expressing yourself I really enjoyed it. Emos are for life <3 I hope to see more of your work.

    I am always here if you need a friend ^^

    - Maria ♥

  • Jazzlyn
    May 27
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    she's meanie for hurting big broher
    you ok now?

  • she was a bitch!!!!!! dont worry bro I'm here for you

  • wow what a backstabbing bitch

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