I blinked my eye.
It was only for a second.
I missed a second of seeing you smile.
I fell asleep.
I fell into a slumber.
I felt your hand holding mine.
I feel so in love that my heart wants to sing a song.
The flavor of your lips is so masculine.
The reason I bleed is because my heart bleeds for you.
Feel your heart in my hand.
Feel the ocean breeze as the sun sets in your eyes.
Feel my memories like their drops of love.
Hold me when I'm breaking down.
Just another kiss and we'll be wed.
Say: "I do."
Soon I'll marry you.
The flavor of your lips is so masculine.
The reason I bleed is because my heart bleeds for you.
Feel your heart in my hand.
Feel the ocean breeze as the sun sets in your beautiful eyes.
My heart wants to sing for you.
It leaps for joy.
You're my lovely.
Author notes
e. Don't Wanna Miss A Thing (by Aerosmith)
Picture taken from: Internet
A contest entry
- 5 Options for the Creative Poet (26) by bananasfoster42.
700 points, ended June 18, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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this is sweet! thanks for the entry!
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I don't know the song but I like this take. You've got it bad. This is so romantic and I especially like the bit about masculine lips.
Enjoyed your write. Oh, "I feel into a slumber". Should that be "I feel"?
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A timeless song I think and you did a wonderful job with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest
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I love the song and I loved this poem. It was beautiful and tender, although the last line was a bit off-kilter ... "you're my lovely" felt like it should have finished a bit better. Otherwise excellent as usual.
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