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Upper palates and tortoise tales.

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He croons a chorus

in circular paths

and sketches stations

along my spine--

 

defining differences

in bare-breaths of bark,

whilst carpenting paranormalities

across reality's sprigs.

 

So I carve chakras along sides

of soul,

to thrum through nadis

that nurture existence

and I enrich inner ideals

with a pasture of personality...

 

whilst opening optics

to the sushumna of self-realisation:

 

I am continuation of air--

 

mere matter-of-fact flow,

that furrows emotions

to the echo of my frown

 

and conscience relates itself

only to the clinginess

of my centuries.

 

Fondness fluctuates

between fate and desire,

etching electric energies

into symbols of his sun--

 

to measure the meaning of me

beneath his dawn

 

and so

 

we wade wisdom,

entwined within reflections

of passion's roots.

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

this actually has 2 deep metaphoric meanings, aswell as the obvious surface meaning...i won't be explaining it to anyone - i'm more interested to know your interpretations of it


word definitions:

chakras - centres of energy
nadis - nerves associated with chakras
sushumna - the most important chakra. On the practical side, it is a continuation of "Kundalini Yoga"...Kundalini is supposed to rise for self-realisation.

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  • *Sigh* This is just beautiful I so wish I could write like this Self realisation within love's embrace

  • A one hundred percent masterpiece (or mistresspiece) this at the top of your form. Mind you the metaphors aren't easy because they're so deep and personal. I'd give you multiple golds for this! Love, Grams.

    • thanks Grams...i'm glad you understand me...i was starting to feel a little lost, all those views and yet hardly a comment; i was worried incase i became too intelligent to belong...i'm simply too tired today to be ostracised again for my "talents".

      i love you

  • I'm reading this at 5:30 in the morning so I'm not my sharpest at the moment. I can see though that this is a poem that deserves to be read indepth to draw out all it has to offer. I will have to read this again later when I can give it the attention it definitely deserves. I'll be back!