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Last Hours Together

A clock chimes in the distance
another hour passed
the time spent was fun, indeed
the memories will last

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  • Sf
    November 30, 2009

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    That's a nice beginning... you certainly know how to create suspense... why was the hour fun???????? what were you up to?

    *cheeky grin*