I've lived my life in misery,
I sacrificed this world to hold you.
I'm there till the end.
Only once was I everything you wanted,
when you wanted it.
No longer are you wanted here.
Your face reflects in the water shed from my tears.
Hell's waiting for you.
Just close your deciving eyes and say goodbye.
Our time is over.
You had your chance,
But kissed it goodbye.
I took you back one last time.
But you pushed me away.
I gave you my love.
But you tore it apart and watched us both die.
It's all come crashing down,
and your the only one left to pick up the pieces.
I hope you died inside.
I hope your joy is gone.
I hope you feel alone.
Forever and always,
I was once there to pick you up.
Say goodbye and say goodnight
Just sleep tight and let the demons bite.
Our world is over.
Farwell my friend.
A contest entry
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Comments
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Very biting tale.
Good imagery and flow, and strong emotions here as well.
Bravo
♥ Kate -
sad, but well- expressed
Thnx for entering & Best of Luck
GloriousGift
Hebz -
very sad piece. full of anger and betrayal. I like the write but it made me sad. You did a good job portraying the way you felt in this. Thank you for sharing.
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