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Skin:

Stolen moments with you
entangled in your dense dark hair
above and down below, the scent of a little death
lingering content surrounding, left like a trophy
but one you cannot take away.

I want these sweet baked favours
and I want to eat them too,

but...

Every bite is laced with sleeping dust
so that then, as I drift uneasily
I see both faces, staring.

Sharp vertices of the triangle
digging in the small of the back with threat and meance
laying with either makes this bed become a place of nails
a stigmatic surrealism sequesters in the head.

The taste of ones skin becomes all the more bitter
the sweeter the other's grows.



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  • Wow, very beautiful and intense. good luck in contest. Nice write.

    Now I want cookies.


  • Shantalina
    May 27
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    Well written,
    Thank you for entering.