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My Heart of Darkness

Loss of love and hope,
The heart is shrouded in darkness
As the wrist bleeds out life
Of sorrow and madness.
Doubt shows within my scars
As more cuts come
For more doubts.
Words break me down
And the razors heal me
On the inside.
Only the love I once longed for
Can heal me over all...

But the darkness in my life is misunderstood
As it turns me into this monster
That no one could truly love...

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  • emoluver
    October 27
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    wow

    another great poem dont beat ureself up


  • xLoveStoryx
    June 2

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    Josh you know better than to shroud yourself in darkness D: i might sound a little hyprocitical but i have my own good reason why my heart aches. you know that :/


  • Antebellum
    May 27

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    But the darkness in my life is misunderstood
    As it turns me into this monster
    That no one could truly love...


    amazing ending.
    Its a sad story.. I think everyone goes through some point in their life.


  • pieface
    May 27

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    Josh,
    Dont think like that. every one makes mistakes. She still loves you. She is head over heals for you dont forget that. Bro what you two have is true.
    love yea kristen


    • schwartzwald
      May 27
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      She's head over heels for a guy that has failed her? All because of me a man wrapped in tin foil, she became heartless!! Don't you get it?! I failed once again like I always do...

      • pieface
        May 28
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        Josh,
        You can sit there and beat keep beating your self up about something in the past of push foward to make a better future for the one that you love. SHE DID NOT BECOME HEARTLESS!!!! No one truly is no matter how much they say they are. Hell starks is far from it and he has been saying that he is snice like Dec.. Yes you may have messed up but that is common! You are only HUMAN! Humans make mistakes its in our nature to do that. All you can do is to learn from that mistake and work to not makeing it any more. Bro I love you and support you no matrer what. LAst time I didnt know how to really help you, but now I do. I wont let a bad mistake get the best of you.
        Take care,
        Kristen


  • XBrittniX
    May 27
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    this is kick ass!!


  • feelingforgotten
    May 27
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    I really like this. I can relate to it.

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