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"Love" an Etheree

Love
Simple
Just let go
Love will remain
Love given sustains
Love received awakens
Love is an understanding
That you don’t need to understand
Love’s energy is undefeated
If you simply let go it flows freely

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  • janeofdreams silver member
    July 17

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    Inspired thought, artistic presentation

    Wonderful form! The visual adds to the enjoyment of the poem. It's like you "see" love flowing outward, from one point and increasing beyond. It's a beautiful message written with inspired thought. My favorite line is "love's energy is undefeated".