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My Life Now

We are made for each other
I was made to be your lover
I am the happiest I have ever been
I have never been happier with any of the world’s men
You mean the world to me
And that’s why I am your wife to be

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  • GothicFyre
    May 27

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    Awwwwww.........sweet! Didn't think the background fitted, but it was so sweet. I loved the first two lines, it was beautiful. I'd suggest a pink/purple background....idk why it just fits.