I've been loved by an angel,
whom has fallen from grace,
the pain and the sorrow,
painted on your face,
yet I know in my heart,
and I will not deny,
that I somehow enjoy,
these sweet tears that I cry,
for they prove that I love you,
and I gave you my heart,
in spite of the risk,
that you might tear it apart,
though I've left you for now,
I hope and I pray,
that if you truely love me,
you will come back someday,
and we'll stand there once more,
outside by that stone bench,
and I will stare into your eyes,
that were so full of love,
as you kneel on one knee,
and ask me to marry you.
Constructive critism not insults!
Comments
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simple and touching.
marvellous in its simplicity.
heartwrenching and enlightening.
i loved it from start to finish.
^_^
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Excellent
I love it! Slightly Ironic though. lol
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Lovely and heart touching but a little strange. May be becouse of the title. overall great write.
be happy!
Ali
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Simple but yet very amazing. Great write
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