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Where has the ceiling gone?

Where has my ceiling gone?
I wondered late last night,
As lonely as a cloud,
Among many daffidils.

Bird were flying all around me,
(how the hell did they get in here?)
Grandma was swinging from the trees,
What happened to me!

I saw my old friend,
A purple dinosaur,
Went on a journey,
Found what i was looking for.

Wondered late last night,
While skipping round the flower beds,
Where has my ceiling gone?

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RAINbow Q 5

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  • WONDERFUL!!! It made me laugh. Today was a bad day and this was just what I needed. Good luck!