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Colourful me

I'm in another flash of red,
Come here if you wanna be dead.

I'm as plain as moth,
With the bright light of the sun,
Orange, red and gold.

It's been different since I met him,
I know he feels the same way to,
Why have all the colours gone?

I used to be a rainbow,
Remorse,
Optimisim,
Yet these seem fading,
Gaeity,
Bitterness,
Irritation still remains,
Vengence fades.

These are the effects of a boy,
Seems silly now.

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  • I can very much relate to this poem...I especially like the ROYGBIV and the last stanza...

  • This is a unique poem, and I like the details. The text color was burniing my eyes, but it's all good. Great poem and I wish you thebest of luck.