Quote the songs that melt my heart
Cos soon I know we'll be apart
It's not the way I want to be
This thing I feel inside of me
I know not of what you say
You know I want it the other way
The times you felt and heard and seen
The lines you read in between
You spoke the words I wanted to hear
But now I see you've disappeared
I hate the way you won't come back
Now everything I see is black
Quote the songs that melt my heart
Cos I've known right from the start
That when I have sung and rhymed
I will say goodbye, my mind
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Written @ 01:37 on 24th March 2002
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A contest entry
- Sad & Lonely by BloodofaDeadRose.
300 points, ended January 13, 2005, 50 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Really a great write! Loved it!
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Sad
But still very good 
Great job. I loved the rhyming here, and the sad emotions, which were so very well expressed throughout the entire piece.
Great Job, And Good Luck with the contest!
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I'll say goodbye
this is a very nice write we all touch each other if only for a moment...steveV -
this is a good piece. your rhyming sequence works well, and i enjoyed reading this. thank you for entering and good luck <33
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i enjoyed!
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wow! wanting and not having....
great job!
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