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Chilling At My Desk
People Scream Through My Headset
Gonna Shoot Someone

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    June 23
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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    This certainly made me think that you need to work elsewhere. I worked in IT and god knows it made me wanna pull the trigger too! LOL

    Welcome to Allpoetry
    I hope that you enjoy the site, and if you have any questions please don't hesitate to ask
    I encourage you to comment others and generate activity for yourself!

    Good job, keep writing.


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    May 27

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    Ugh...

    get another job! Technically this is a Senryu of sorts. I'd recommend getting a handle on the form beside the 5/7/5 count. There's a certain finesse about Japanese form that takes a while to get a handle on. It's more than just economy of words. Lines one & two should blend into each other & line 3 is the aha moment. AP has classes & Shadow Poetry has examples & descriptions. Oh...caps are also not used or punctuation.