You left a smile
Upon my face
Depressing trace erased
You’re like sugar coated skulls
Scary but oh so sweet
I must call defeat
For you have left
Me breathless
I laugh when I hear your name
And think it a game
When you act the same
As I do
I love how we fit together
Like a bird and a feather
A song and a verse
Or a witch and a curse
I meld into your arms
Like I was meant to be
The only thing you see
To fit without slip
Like the last piece of a puzzle
You complete my heart
That has so many times broken
With words left unspoken
When people refused
To stand up
What the cluck?!
Your voice caresses me
Your smile unstresses me
But you body
Just winds me back up
To the peak of the hype
Where I think not of fright
But only your arms
That hold me
Your voice that told me
You’d always be there
To tell me you care
Till the sun did rise
To be in your arms forever
Is how I wish it could be
Where to you I am the Raven
And you’re the Angel to me
Author notes
About me and my boyfriend Ash.
A contest entry
- feelings and love by ShadowWeaver.
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Judge's Verdict
you have a lot of rythm but its hard for me a bit cause you dont have any puncuations. i like the final lines where its, 'im the raven and you are the angel to me'.
thank you for entering and good luck in the contest/ -
wow i like this one. lots of rythm but you forgot the commas at the end of each line and the periods. i do like the line that says "what the cluck?!" though. this is really good. thanks
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