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Neurotic.

Stop it.

Stop it.

My whisper feels like a Shakespearean heartbeat, but it breaks when a lamp shatters. The light goes out and it becomes dark.

Stop it.

I dare not tiptoe nor make a sound. My stomach may growl but I would not feed it.

The telephone makes inhuman beeps that sound pathetic at a time of sloshing nerves. It stops. Then starts again.

Breath sighs and my whisper continues, Stop it stop it stop it.

The heartbeat. The blood flow. A broken artery in which all of the angry blood seeps out in one distressed spurt, when choked bubble of sick red.

Staunch it. Stop it.

Voices are lowered.

I hope for the best.

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"I never even got to see them. Ever."

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  • Mortal
    May 28
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    Panic attack?
    I know that feeling.

    • That's not actually what it's about, although I could see why you'd think that. My imagery is often unsettling.