and now.
cut open the clothing.
go on.
snick-snick-snick like stilettos on glass,
like nails scoring the ridges of a spine,
like a chopping board.
it is only skin.
but what skin;
taste it. saturated, drenched, dripping with
‘tomorrow never comes’ -
‘everyone does.
except tomorrow.’
A contest entry
- we are what happened when god closed his eyes. by aanika.
3500 points, ended June 19, 27 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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oh my god.
just...wow.

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Glad I decided to pursue your poetry. I love this


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i really like the title.
actually i really like the piece as a whole.
it's abstract, but at the same time it's beautiful and makes sense and wants to make me break down and cry.
i don't know.
but thanks for entering <3 -
ah i am so late in commenting this love! please forgive me :/
anyways onto the poem, i am utterly impressed, the first line drew me in. got to be honest though not too into the title but to each his own right?
so for the most part i loved the message behind this, not too sure i got it right but i got an idea
thank you for sharing my dear!! <3






