Do you hear me,
I'm screaming for you!
I need you in my heart,
I can't live without you.
Your soul is bound to me,
The beat of our song lives in you and me.
Come to me,
Lay your fingers on my strings.
I need you to play,
Play the song of love.
I am dead without you,
I shine with you.
We could be a legend.
Do not betray me,
Or our song will makes the ears bleed.
Your are lost without me.
I own you.
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Gut?
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Nicely done with this piece.
Good flow and imagery here.
Bravo
♥ Kate -
im thinking your a man. sorry but statements made make me think that. Can't help it cause im one of those synical woman lol. nice work and Thank you so much for taking the time to enter my contest and best wishes to you!
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Lena -
"Your soul is bound to me,
The beat of our song lives in you and me.
Come to me,
Lay your fingers on my strings.
I need you to play,
Play the song of love.
I am dead without you,
I shine with you."
This could be written about how I feel about my love. He owns me lock stock and barrel ^.,^ He is my world even if I am not his. Thank you for sharing this it was well written. -
ooo ooo ooo!!! i love this.! i used to play the cello.
good job cheyenne!!! (sp?)
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Gut, gut Indeed.
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i'm sorry but you were supposed to ask befpore taking a prompt, if you would like to go back and ask for a different prompt you are allowed to but i have to DQ this. Im sorry.
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No, I'll just slop my poetry around somewhere else.
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Beautiful write great job
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Thankies love.
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