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Imperceptible Fate.

Fate resides within mans heart,
it's something that cant be altered.

Trying to manipulate it is pointless,
for everything happens for a reason.

Just like the sky above,
man only has one.

All we can do is....

"Pray for our sorrows to end, and hope for our hearts to blend"



Author notes

Prompt: "One sky, One destiny." from Kingdom Hearts 2.
This was the letter Kairi wrote for Sora at the Beginning of KH2.

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  • Tzipora
    June 4

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    very very good. love the finish

    my favorite part though would have to be...
    "Fate resides within mans heart,
    it's something that cant be altered."

  • Lovely and I loved the picture you added. I just loved the letter Kairi wrote I just had to use part of it in my contest . Very well written and thanks for entering.

  • Beautiful ending... I love your point of view. Bravo!

    HUGSSS becca