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The Shapeshifter

Iniquitous her beauty
Yet respect she does aspire
Senses waver like flames
As she seeks what she requires

Demure upon the surface
Wantonness lurks within
Driven by her need
Salacious is her sin

Beneath the veil of virtue
War rages in the heart
Tearing morals asunder
As she slowly falls apart

Author notes

I chose option No. 1 A very cool picture!

http://valentinakallias.deviantart.com/art/The-Shapeshifter-123694395

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  • Kathraina gold member
    June 4

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    Wow, marvelous take on the prompt!
    Fantastic flow and imagery throughout.
    Bravo


    ♥ Kate


  • DeJaBlue
    May 28

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    Oooo, this is nice.
    I love that last stanza..
    Well done.


  • Raspy
    May 27

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    Simply Stunning

    There isn't too much to say.
    You wrote and delivered this so perfectly.
    I felt the colous vibrating on the canvass.
    Good luck sweety!

  • oh my i do love this very much, this is definatly a favorite

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