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Passions Is His Juliet (ded. bosiarbooger)

I have found your Romeo

sitting by my side

You clawed away his heart

and tore the man inside

 

Crystal drops claimed his eyes

and fear has kept his soul

Within this man I had found

a yearning to be whole

 

Tis Juliet will tend his heart

and follow through she will

His heartache will disappear

even though you love him still

 

Be gone you decietful menace

I stand beside him now

Bosiar doesn't need the likes of you

he sees it clearly now

 

For Passions is his Juliet

& has bestowed on him her love

So the swords been lifted dear

you'll never be enough

 

One step forth I'll do you in

for you won't bring him down

I shall stand on my guard

until the final round

 

Oh the handsome Romeo

has tasted the forbidden well

There is no turning back

he's under Passion's spell

 

Thunders heard you came forth

oh what a stupid fool

Across your throat a single strike

Passions lost her cool

 

Through your eyes you plead to him

and to your knees you fall

I wave my hand against the storm

I'm standing ten feet tall

 

He turned to me and kissed my lips

for he seen the love I carried

No man no woman can tear him away

for I'm the one he married

 

 

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Te Amo Mi Amor

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  • Knight70 silver member
    September 13

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    Wow!

    This flows so beautifully off the tongue when read aloud, both in rhyme and rhythm. There are two things I love about your poetry, and they are:

    1. your passion for romance in poetry
    2. your love for heroes who defend us



    Don


    • PassionsPromise gold member
      September 13
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      hey you sweetness, glad to see you, you like making me worry

      thank you for your lovely comment, here is a latest, and a sad one at that, oh by the way I have a contest going for the Vietnam Veterans so be sure and stop in
      s

      Passions

      http://allpoetry.com/poem/5707897

  • likeadrug
    July 20
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    I love the imagery here. It is very emotional. The last line- wow. Fantastic.

  • The flow of this is very good. The rhyme just works.
    My favorite stanzas are 1,2, and 7.
    You(Passionspromise) write well with others.


  • moluv10
    June 30
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    a gem of a write. you definately took your place as his juliet. i love this.


  • Grateful
    June 17
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    i really enjoyed this poem...just wonderful!
    all the best....

  • Though this does speak of love, in the sense of devotion - it also seethes of a certain angst, a threatening standard - more so than to the one in your heart, but to dare another's own feeling. Not exactly what the contest called for, thank you for your entry!

  • well... you certainly told her and told her good. great job! i am certainly impressed. great job. i wish you well in this contest that you have entered but i can't see anything beating this write. it is superb. viyanna rosemarie

  • I am betting that if Rick's grin got any bigger it would meet at the back and the top of his head would fall off

    Superb

    Jeff

  • Kygrashai
    May 27

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    Strength of a Woman

    The strength of Juliet encourages the hidden women in us all. Thank you for representing our hidden strength.

  • wonderful!

    (pardon my non-poeticness for a moment) that poem kicks so much ass! ok back to the poet. you painted a very strong mental immage and its awesome. i love your juilet


  • movedon
    May 26

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    absolutely stunning mom. i love it. this was just...wow. amazing!

    daughter mylee

  • awesome

    well written. Beautiful. Sweet, but powerful. I really enjoyed this piece. Thank you for sharing. -Sable-


  • Riftkin gold member
    May 26

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    This is a sweet poem of the love that is felt and you are strong enough to do just that.. for you are so full of love and you stand by those that you hold so dear..

    Joann

    • Thank you Joann, I do try to until they betray me. And then, I vanish

      I appreciate you reading.

      Always

      Passions


      • Riftkin gold member
        May 26
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        You are the strongest lady I know.
        Strong in spirit and will.
        Never forget that..

        and you are loved by those that truly
        know you.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    May 26
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    sweet..

    great work

  • Victoria

    This is fantastic I am more than a little blushing. To win the heart of a woman such as you. Honestly the sweetest, kindest, most thoughtful, passionate and down right sexy woman on the planet. I need two cups and they still runnith over. Your Romeo I shall be and by your side I will remain to love and honor to cherish till time runs out. I love you young lady and am blessed, for a new life you have given me. Te amo mi amor, Rick

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