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Sea of Asphalt

I took the whale way
it was innocent then
I encounter illegitimate fiends
the pirates of asphalt surfaces
I raised my flag proudly
so I seem not the enemy
I board hearts and weep
feel for the other there
oh' but what drives me
is a crocodiles hunger
and I cannot feel
one way or the other
cause I took the whale way
it was innocent then
I encounter illegitimate fiends
the pirates of asphalt surfaces.

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  • Antebellum
    May 26

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    it was innocent then
    I encounter illegitimate fiends
    the pirates of asphalt surfaces.

    loved these lines. awesome write.