Alone I lay tangled
with my blanket and sheet.
Only moments ago ~
~I felt your body formed to mine,
in that misty moment
between dream and today.
Feeling your secrets spoken in heartbeats,
responding in warm incandesant blush.
Destiny was unlaced ~
~entwining through us.
You came back…touched for a blink and a breath
my soul was bare, and beheld
leaving a single bright shine, to treasure
'til moments forever.
Author notes
Prompt:
I love the song Get Here by Oleta Adams
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JBSodK6WO_k
LOL this is a little over the top mushy for me these days... but all well... the sad dark ending just didnt fit. 
In a list
A contest entry
- Just another song prompt by fortyninereasons.
1400 points, ended June 8, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very nicely done!!!! A wonderfully penning!
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I was steered to this poem by my "I might enjoy" list. I still have no idea how that list gets decided but on this occassion it was right.... I did enjoy it. Soft, open hearted, intimate thoughts and feelings transferred to written words with eloquence.... not 'mushy'.
Glad you shared it, glad I read it.
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oh i simply dropped the ball on this one sis,
this is sooooooo beautiful, and you were featured tooo! well deserved !!
Destiny was unlaced ~
~entwining through us.
You came back…touched for a blink and a breath
my soul was bare, and beheld
leaving a single bright shine, to treasure
'til moments forever.
simply wonderful!
Blessings
Rend
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i hate when that happens it didnt take the clappys!
darn it so sorry!
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Those moments between dream and today can be the best...unless it's a really good one, then you just wanna fade back into the dream
...Beautifully done.
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so lovely!
Absolutely lovely! i enjoyed reading your take on the prompt, good luck in the contest!!! my favorite part is:
You came back…touched for a blink and a breath
my soul was bare, and beheld
leaving a single bright shine, to treasure
'til moments forever.
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... feeling your secrets spoken in heartbeats...
thank you so much for your entry.
Juls
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What lies between dreams and reality for in that very private space where we can be whatever it is that we wish there is room for the spirit to dance and caress the unknown.
I truly enjoyed this poem as it was delicate and a very powerful message of sincerity and heartfelt desire it did convey.
I like it, I like it so!
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The poem is so beautiful, great imagery.
Thank you for sharing!
Nela
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Today's Featured Poem!!!
This is a very beautiful and loving poem, sensual!
I am featuring this for Today's Poem! This needs to be shared with the others in the group. Thank you for sharing your talent with us!
Blessed Be,
~Raven -
Precious~
Oooooooh Hot Momma~ You sure know how to get the eyes misty
Powerful piece this is and so Love the Dreamy feel and I just got sucked in and don't want to leave
Excellent take on the prompt!! 
More please~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart
Best wishes in all You do
with love & light~ Desire~*~
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The dreams are always the perfect fantasy, the darkness reached only upon waking..it's when I'd like to sleep forever C
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Beautiful, your a shining star, with a talent for sensual.
You dont get it from me, this is awesome.
Be blessed in all you do.
Tony
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In that misty moment between dreams and today - the forever wish for moments are real. As always, the fantasy is perfect, for what else can it ever be but perfect?
But then therein is the reality of it -
A lovely write. ~Pamela
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forever is made by moment
and for moments
and for moments such as these
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Maybe mushy, but in a very good way. Well done, Sunshyne
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sensual and soft nice flow sweet piece here
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beautiful - I think it was lovely, best of luck in the contest
Tasha
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This is sad... beautiful...romantic... soft... sigh all the things I love
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My
Passion, romance and love. We must keep them in a even balance and treasure the words of a gifted poet.
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for a blink and a breath - to drink in the music of love and intoxicate the heart's rhythmic sensations. a good poem.
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The grand piano ate me before I could speak to Aleta's beauty. And yours- you did write it. The poem, that thing; yeah, that.
How is another fun mystery going to hurt a one of us?
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