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What if...

What if the world was to end tomorrow?
What would you do, what would you say?
I'd make sure I get that first kiss
Even if it's not that easy
What would you do?
Take me to Rome
Take me to Spain
That's not what I want
It would drive me insane
All I want is you
And you is all I want
Can you not yet see it
How much I want to be IT
Open your eyes
Don't think this is a dream
See it, feel it
"Viva la vida"
But don't forget to make the most of it
Because the world might end tomorrow
And you might go
I don't want that...no

Author notes

I think this is one of the last poems about my boy for now.When he leaves I will probably write more

A contest entry

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  • X-Elmo-X
    May 27

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    i love it
    like i do all your poems
    i really like all the emotions you put into it so that people can feel what you feel just by reading your poetry.
    thanks for sharing
    cya soon xx


  • higherlove
    May 26
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    aww...i like this one its so sad but its realy good also
    great job!