Tear down these conceited AP walls,
order new ones to be built now!
Offer a helping hand quick - before someone falls,
community my ass, HOW?
I reckon many won't like me,
on AP, poetry comes with a string.
A friendship means something,
no photoshop, no lies, wait and see.
Look around you, there's a lot more,
I'm not new -- I've been here before.
I challenge AP members today,
change for the good, what do you say?
I didn't see a welcome sign that read;
"Welcome to AP - poetic world wide sex fest
Write me a poem and you can join me in bed
the crap here written is proclaimed to be the best!"
I'll raise the stakes starting now,
you worry about the when and how....
Author notes
Smile! It's not that bad ... constructive criticism is healthy --- GROUP HUG!!
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If all the world would see that life is not just one big sex fest perhaps we could live in harmony. Clique, clans and what not these things exist since the dawn of time and I guess will go to the grave with all mankind.
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Thank you for your comment, much appreciated. Hope to see more of you around.
~Kristin~
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Thank you for writing this. Period
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I applaud you for this, agreeing with you wholeheartedly. There are those that feel they are masters of this art and therefore entitled to snub their nose at those they deem beneath their "talent". Hey, I write to release. Sometimes to amuse. A person either likes it or they don't. If you get too what I feel is critical without actually critiquing, then, I know you're one of "those". That clique shit should have been left behind in high school. For some it hasn't. I say be you and %#@^%$* the rest!
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Hahahaha
Bravo!!!!
It is sometimes hard to speak up for your beliefs, especially when it is contrary to what the majority feels. You have to live with yourself first. If you can sleep at night then you'll be ok.
~Ron~
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*smiles @ you*
LOL Thank you Ron! Your comment is much appreciated.
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Kristin
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Hmmm....bold
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Yay! *high five*!! Thanks for the bunnies!
Peace,
Kristin
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Ha ha ha ha ha. But, how do you REALLY feel?
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There's a local commercial that has a tune -- once u hear it, it's stuck in your head ---
It's referring to Texas and littering --- Don't mess with Krissstin -- I wouldn't do it!
(Texas)
Good seein' ya friend,
Kristin
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There a saying that a wise an told me oftentimes whenever I got sick of "the crap". He said, "As long as there are two people on the earth, there will be war." Speak your mind regardless, are we not free people? Thank you for writing.
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lol Red Rocket -- speaking is definitely something I'm good @ -- and speaking what's on my mind is something I used to think no one gave a rats rear end about ... but I recently came to the conclusion -- if one doesn't speak their mind - as you put it, then how can you really know that no one cares to listen.
So here I be -- doing just that -- all in good fun, no harm intended.
Thanks for the 3 bunnies and hope to see more of you soon.
Peace,
Kristin
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All righty then
Good to have you back as I said earlier, it's nice to stir things up every once and a while. many cliques here and I've not found one I fit into yet though I have met many wonderful people. As a loner by trade a gypsy if you will I rarely bother with those who are uninterested in me. my works don't draw many comments still I write for the few who do read and mostly myself.
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This was merely an expressive piece... don't read too much into it. It was fun to expand a welcoming handshake to those who are unfamiliar w/ me and me of them... lol
Thanks for the bunnies,
Kristin
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this is an interesting poem. im not sure exactly what it's about, but it flows nicely and was different to read! . what was your muse??
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What was my muse --- I guess you could say people get hurt way too often. People get jealous on here for what? For the simple every day routine of writing? I don't think so. In fact too many people get their feelings hurt, more than they should, due to expectations and obligations... that's what this was about. I'm sorry you didn't fully understand the message, than again, it's probably a good sign that you didn't.
Contrary to what popular belief will be --- I didn't write this to stir the pot -- No, I merely wrote to pass a message to those who might receive it.
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ahhh, i see. i agree it should be a place where people are able to write without being judged unfairly. after all isn't this a place for constructive criticism and engouraging comments?
thanks for the reply and explaination
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You're welcome hun -- hope to see more of you soon. Thanks for reading my work. There's more that's not written w/ such a punch, if you're interested. I shall return the favor as well.
Have a good one,
Kristin
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I'm always up for a hug, and for constructive criticism.
Good to read you back here
A challenging restart!
Jeff
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Constructive criticism comes before the hug lol...
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I know, poetry was just stolen from me.
Love,
Amera♥
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Wanna get it back?
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