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Like a shining north star

If the sun could smile,
it would be the expression
from your visage.
Your spirit shines like
a glowing light,
a caring and compassionate aura
that could light up
a cloudy sky!
If the word generosity

ever be given as a name,

you would be the first person

for it to be given to!

You're an ocean among rivers,

a mountain surrounded by hills,

an eagle compared to a sparrow.

Your spirit affects me,

positively and immensely,

your words and actions are sincere

and the requited, repeated affections

run long within me,

as long as it would take

to travel to the galaxy!

 

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Written for a good friend, he's been there so much for me, my appreciation isn;'t large enough for words....

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  • heinzs silver member
    June 2
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    :-)


  • nell
    May 29
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    what a gorgeous tribute hun! this is beautiful and classic you... love the feeling and images put across, everyone needs a friend like you have (and like you)
    "You're an ocean among rivers,
    a mountain surrounded by hills,
    an eagle compared to a sparrow." great wording!

    love love Nell
    (cant believe you didnt tell me you posted!)


  • peaceimout
    May 27

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    A great tribute in honor of your friend and friendship. Those kind of bonds really are a treasure. A delight to read

  • your appreciation comes across loud and clear here!! great job! I'm certain your friend will be more than flattered if and when they read this!! peace an dlight always in all ways, kp

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