My life is made up of seconds
decreasing over time
my heart beat is slowing
at a rate thats undefined
My life is made up of secrets
increasing over time
My mind is quickly filling
with thoughts i can't deny
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good poem though awfully short you should make a part two or maybe re edit
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Honesty is a virtue, but good writing
Keep on penning
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Very nice quick rhyme-y poem
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full impact
is what you get with this specific write.Well done - it is so true this life you write of.
Looking forward to reading more of your work!
Jane
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wonderfully written,
short, but packed with emotion.
Thanks for sharing. -
An amazing poem and really well written. Brilliant!
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wow. its so short but its screams volumes! great rhyming, its subtle and yet captivating. really well done.
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This poem is amazing, no joke.
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the complextion and innovation of life, some find it scary i find it challenging.
my interpretation anyway.
coll beans -
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the first line is supposed to be seconds not secrets oops!
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