i turn my head slightly
i look at you
out of the corner of my eye
you do the same
i giggle as
i see you watching me
i lick my lips
getting ready
to ask
the question
David
could you pass me
my pencil
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Written March 14th, 2004
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That was extremely decieving but cute none the less. Great job I liked how you get everyone believing its gonna be someone about love then...its just about the pencil. lol Great job.
-J. -
oooo, this is just tooo good!
it was very cute and it made me laugh. i really liked the ending the"david could you..." that was just so funny! keep up the good work!
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thanx for the comment... i really appreciate it
*T0XIIK* -
This poem is sweet.. it makes you wonder what is going to happen..but yet what does happen is just funny but it put a smile on my face..good write
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thats hilarious. You had me believing it was gonna be some sort of mushy love...I like that kind of stuff though, and it stead the ending was hillarious. It really cought my eye when I say my boyfriends name. Great write. you surely got a laugh out of me. Keep up the great work.
~Heather
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