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Enemy

Look at you
In all of your armor
Your little army ready
Your rifle loaded and cocked
Your little bombs ready to be dropped
As if they were gonna do much harm

I'm coming
I'm coming for you
Are you ready?
Are you ready for my army of one?
Sometimes two
Are you ready for the things I'm gonna do?

I am the enemy
I am your enemy
Your rival
Your nemesis

Are you ready?
Cause I'm coming
Do you see me standing here?
Do you have that feeling of fear?
Crawling up your little spine?
Do you feel that your pride is in danger?

Is that your castle you must defend?
Is that why always pretend?
That you are educated and involved
Every little issue solved
Strong minded
Independent
Is that why you're always pretending?

I think it's pathetic, the things you want
Yeah I know what you want
How you want people to see you
I'd like to say I've seen you out of your shell,
but you have so many of them now
and now it's time for you to defend your shell of pride
Cause' I'm coming
I'm coming for you
I am the enemy
I am your enemy

You like to challenge everyone else,
but when you lose you get angry
If you are not prepared for failure
then ready your defenses

I am your enemy
So polish your rifle
Load single bullets into the chamber
Point the barrel forward
Line up your sites on me
Put your index finger on the trigger
Squeeze it
Hard!
And hope to god you hit and kill
Cause' I'm coming for you

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  • EternallyAlone
    October 27

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    reiteration that you are the enemy, but this was a marvelous piece. It would be confusing as your adored to read this because of all the contradicting points, but I guess that's how you feel.


  • Howl- gold member
    October 27

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    Great read! reminiscent of masters of war, by bob dylan. love the rhetorical questions too. and the line about looking cute when your angry. very witty
    cheers