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Broken Lies

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You swear it's the last time you'll make her cry,
but you and I know both know it's a broken lie.
You'll rape her, bleed her, destroy her, and then
you'll bruise her, beat her, kill her once again...
 

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  • loud whispers
    July 24
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    i like this one its so clear andto the point.very powerful
    love


  • Diminished Capacity gold member
    June 25
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    Wow, this packs a powerful punch. So little words but speaks in volume.


  • Cyanide Dreams
    June 10

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    Whoa, nicely done. So much said in so little words. The imagery in this was great and the emotions so sad. I liked what you did with the prompt as well. Great job and congrats on your shiny.

    josh


  • Borntowriteforever
    June 8
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    very powerful, i like it.


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    June 6

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    This is so powerful, we seem to continue to go back for more of the same, lessons never learnt. Well done here. Best to you in the contest


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    May 27

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    So powerfully put. I can relate to this one as been victim in this way myself. Very expressive, deep and just raw. It's the truth.


  • GodsRebelChild
    May 27
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    Wow

    So great...it defines the picture really well....Loved the write...


  • XXheartbroken3XX
    May 26
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    wow AMAZING... really fits with the picture!!!

    XOXO

  • shauney11
    May 26
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    beautiful

    It's really amazing!


  • individuality gold member
    May 26

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    ah love and its broken ways, into the days it wanders, shattering spirits with a dead ache in the heart of control. a good poem.

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