For you, life is about to slow down
Now is the time to stop, think, plan and dream.
Take a deep breath, feel the peace and the calm.
Enjoy the senses! Sit...close your eyes...and smell the
beauty summertime has to offer. Relax in the sun. Feel the gentle
warmth of the wind on
your cheeks.
..and dream. Dream a dream filled with happiness and joy.
Feel it all the way into the core of your heart.
Do what you want to be and become the person you are
destined to become!
Anything and everything is within your reach.
You are surrounded by love. Now is the time to dream your dream!
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This is lovely; absolutely scrumptious! You're a wonderful poetess, Mum, and I love reading your work... That means you need to post more often. Hahahaha
I can't wait to be at home with you and Daddy 
Just a little lesson in mechanics... The word at the end of each line is the one you want your reader to remember while transitioning to the next line. For example, here:
"Enjoy the senses! Sit...close your eyes...and smell the
beauty summertime has to offer. Relax in the sun. Feel the gentle warmth of the wind on
your cheeks..."
"Beauty" and "cheeks" are much stronger words than "the" and "on". Someone pointed this out to me about 2 years ago, and it's the best advice I've ever been given in my years here
Great job!
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