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Pressing Need

Missing image
Twilight unfolds
with pressing need
under a glowing full moon
as darkness floats in
with savored sweetness
like fine wine shared
and in the quiet aftermath
the murmurs of lovers
sing like crickets in the night

Author notes

Pic Prompt: Photo above: from www.ffffound.com
Damn i missed the closing of a contest while trying to write this....might finish it later

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  • glenn shannon silver member
    May 27
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    its a sweet right on a sweet ride to bank cock by the look of the photo nice take enjoyed it


  • The Drifter
    May 26
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    A sweet night, no better way to spend the night. A sweet poem, with some spice for the heat.


  • Girl-Interrupted gold member
    May 26

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    So much imagery! What a beautiful piece you have penned..
    as darkness floats in
    with savored sweetness
    like fine wine shared
    and in the quiet aftermath

    Amazing!

    becca