The wind billowing your soft hair
The leaves flowing through the air
The sun enlightens that enchanting stare
The one that says "I'll always be there."
This moment in time, you cant deny
Embrace the breeze as time slips by
WIth you, only you, forever I'll try
To know not the words hello or goodbye
For somewhere inbetween is where I'll stay
Yes, here in this moment, as the trees sway
As the wind blows throughout the peaceful day
I'll stand by your side, come what will, what may
We'll sit here underneath our blossoming tree
Me here with you, and you here with me
In hopes that I do not awake from this ecstacy
That I do not awake from my nutty hammock fantasy
With you I lie
With you I cry
With you I try
My nutty hammock fantasy...
Comments are appreciated...
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I simply love it! Its amazing as is everything that comes out of that genius mind you have!


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Really good, I like it. = )
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Excellent write. I love the simple concept of lying with you lady but also making it sickly romantic. Great write


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i love me some nuts..yum yum.... and this poem lol
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nicely done

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Superb
A most excellent write, indeed. Imagery; rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us.
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