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Defuse



on the bed I lay
waiting to exhale
night and day
your words of comforts
carries me to a new world
they give me a new start
your touches a lone
defuse my inner lust
in your arms, I feel reborn
with so much love to share
I am living the dream of a king
forget the world, I could care less
with you in my life, I am breathless
your absence brings me to my knees
it kills me to not see you, it get me hopeless
your kisses infuse unlimited imagery
being with you is such a luxury
my life, my love is all in your heart
my love is endless, together or apart




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