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come lay with me

Over time i've come to realize that love is just a game,
and true love is like a grand prize.
see you hardly ever win, and when you do you feel
like you never got the best of the best that's out there.
so i'm here to tell you, you can search no more, no,
cuz i'm the one who's gonna fill your heart up.

so, come lay with me, baby,
in my arms you'll find love
sweeter than all hell.

now i know i may not be right for some
but i know in my heart that i'm right for you:
you wanna girl who's sweet, a little bitter too...
you wanna girl who's soft, and a little tough too.
you wanna girl who can stand up for her rights
and a girl who's gonna lean on you.
you want her to know that you're worth it,
yeah, you want her to know that you can work it...
now i ain't tryin to brag,
but i'm the girl you need
and i'm on my way.

so, come lay with me, baby,
in my arms you'll find love
sweeter than all hell.

you see, it's like you're locked in a dungeon
fobidden to dream;
forbidden to see the sun...
and, baby, i'll come along and sweep you off your feet;
hunny i am your key, i am the one.
i'll set you free, bid you to dream,
and i'll be your fantasy...

so, come lay with me, baby,
in my arms you'll find love
sweeter than all hell.
mmhmmmmm...

i actually based this song off a poem i wrote about 5 years ago... be honest, what do you think?

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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