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Rodger's Smile

Rodger was a middle aged man who liked to sleep in a bright pair of green pyjamas. One summer night a strange and frightening man climbed through his bedroom window carrying a brick. Before Rodger could even scream the man brandished the brick in a threatening manner and made Rodger play with his penis and balls. The man watched on with a gleam in his eye, sweating profusely. He then rolled Rodger over, held him down and fingered his middle aged white ass. After some time Rodger heard the man groan and go slack. Rodger rolled over just in time to see the man jump out his window. Whilst laying there drifting back to sleep a smile came to Rodger’s face as he realised, although the man with the brick had left a burning in his ass, it wasn’t all that unpleasant, in fact it was good burn indeed.

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