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tangle of threads;

 

 

 

 



I will cut off the seams

and tie them together;

no slither of silver thread

under asphalt quilts -

we are preventing pricks

of injustice but, we fail

and the clock strikes nul;

we've made a final mistake.

 

 

 

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hmmm interpret how you will.

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    Mind blowing.