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Im sorry

I am sorry as I had hate words for my uncle as he left
He was a naval private and I said I hated him
There following him was my father
I hated them as they left

When the war was over their planes came in
Getting off the plane was my father but not my uncle
I cryed and huged my father as I said last thing I said to him was I hate you
My father started to cry as my father looked at me and said

" your uncles last words were I love nick and I hate me too"

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For my uncle paul Im sorry

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  • speachless

    wow... good luck and thanks for entering my contest


  • Night Rose
    May 28
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    moonlight vampire

    wow this is sad and good but not much to say since this is personal