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[ Another year of birthday spirit. ]

Another year of birthday spirit.
Cheer and laughter in thee.
as best as she can be.
With more beauty growing each year..
Such a talented writer, and embracing smile!
Its a pleasure to be here.
With you,on such cherishing moments.
Wishing you a Happy Birthday!!

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Is there anything you woûld change about this? Thanks for your time!!

This is actually my 2nd contest that I've entered..So I hope you enjoy this.. Happy 17th Birthday. :-)

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Dragonbabyx3
    July 13

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    aw! this is such a sweet birthday wish! we all grow all the time, in so many ways, a birthday is just a way to mark it, to make even more happy memories! this is a beautiful and heartfelt wish you have penned! great work!!!


  • Fallen-Thumper gold member
    May 26
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    i wouldn't change anything about this

    i really like it