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Don't Want To

Work too hard at this friendship
Same thing every time
Worried.

Never call
All your time with her
Not calling unless you do.

But I don’t want to
give up on you.

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  • temporarybeauty
    May 25

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    This is interesting. I like the stream-of-consciousness feel. The intimate tone that you use helps the reader relate well. I like it a lot.