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The Case ...

Contest Chicken Ball Charley by sheltered and the case of the missing ribs.

 

Our story begins here ...on these pages...it has for ages.

On the South side of town rested the old retired clown ...
his Nokia rang his last pre-paid minutes precious as no income waited for him this week...

Outside the old utility shed, hand painted all bright shiney and red... hung his Detectives Shingle...
Read "No job to big or small - call anytime at all ...Chicken Ball Charley 555-5555."

Yeah , he answered in a gruff voice ...sure it is your choice...
I charge by the day or the hour.

He jumped into the shower and off he ran to find the  delivery...missing ribs...this was his case...
Be beef or pork he never did ask ...just he was up for the task ...


He followed the trail to a Smokey BB-Q smell...he spotted the truck...but he was out of luck...

He found that ol'Hound covered in a bib licking the last rib....

 

 

 

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Prompt: Contest Chicken Ball Charley by sheltered


and the case of the missing ribs.




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  • this was too funny. a detective searching for missing rib...lol!
    i really enjoyed this.


    • guardianhost gold member
      August 15
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      Thank you for reading and commenting on me

      The judge did not like it and I seem to have trouble pleasing most judges - I use a free from rhyme style - my own. Your comment is valable to me thank you,


  • sheltered
    June 11
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    honestly don't care for such blatant rhyme
    but chuckle-worthy

    • guardianhost gold member
      June 11

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      Thank you for the odd prompt

      I found it both refreshing and interesting.
      The poem actually wrote its self. I am a writer for childrens stories and the prompt was excellent. Thank you for your kindness.
      Sincerely,
      Cheryl

  • this is sooo cool and funny when people here ask my number i always say 555 ... 555 from the movies lol loved it

    • I had fun with this one too !

      I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you for reading and commenting on me. xxxoooxxx


  • crimsondew
    May 25
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    lol...like how you wrote this...very creative!
    All the best!

    • Thank you my friend...I am glad you enjoyed it.

      It was a fun prompt and basicly wrote its own self. Thank you for reading and commenting on me.
      Cheryl

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