Caught in a web of screams
I dreamt a dream of many dreams
tears of realistic fears ~ repetitive for many years
I end up stranded in the here and now
as I swallow my fury,
I face a labyrinth of thousands
who question the purpose ...
Like a reflection in a mirror, I see YOU
clearly ...
I extend my hand and like yesterday's
memory, we tightly embrace.
Intimately we unite for the moment,
our souls woven together and in this moment
I wasn't lost ...
Whispers from within showed me
and allowed me to be free.
I breathed a breath of yours,
violating all reason, primitive promises
excused...
... leaving me wanting, needing ...
showing me life again, filled with HOPE
curiously, I ache for more.
Caught in a web of lustful screams,
I dreamt a dream of many dreams.
Tears of longing and bent knees of prayer
opening my heart up for tons of hope
without your spirit, I couldn't cope.
Author notes
I hope this finds the one it's meant for ... How does this piece make you feel? Talk to me...
Comments
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I really like the rhythm in this... excellent job (thought I'd take a gander at your work since you've kindly commented on some of mine)
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Nice seein' you here ... and thank you for your kindness as well.
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I truly enjoyed this write, it is so amazingly penned, that I dont really have any words. You have great talent....
Keep your pen flowing with ink that never fade
illusion
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A deep piece full of emotion here. Written with such passion too. You are talented. Keep it up.
Dark Wishes
Wayne Leon
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Glad you enjoyed ... thanks for the dark wishes too.
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This is interesting. A mix of freeverse and rhyme. The subject matter is deep and powerful. Seems like a transitional poem, "as I go from here to there..." Bravo.
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It is a transitional piece, thank you. I was transitioning when I wrote it -- haha ---
Nice to have your stamp on my page here,
Kristin
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I really missed your poetry! This is truly beautiful and filled with emotion. I think what makes this poem so powerful is the way you pen the echoes so easily,.like; “dream of many dreams” and “breathed a breath”. Wonderful work
Love,
Amera
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Awww ---
You know why I came back -- wasn't to publish my poetry -- but to be surrounded by those who made me strong @ my weakest moments. The Sisters of Ap --- the best friends life could offer --- the warriors who guide us to the victory line! Amera darlin', you're one who may not be in my life, but in virtual life, you've managed to make a difference in my real life... if that makes sense. lol
Didn't mean to get mushy -- but damn it -- if we didn't want mushy some of the time we souldn't be on a freakin' poetry site. RIGHT? lol
Thanks for coming and reading my work. Glad you enjoyed it.
Love,
Kristin
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I am sure it will hit the ol sap sooner or later.
lovely piece my darling Kris
Love you
Tory
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Thank you darlin' Tory for your comment. Good to see you again.
Love you 2
Kris
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oh..this is sooo lovely!
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Thank you
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