Even
Fair
Just
Right
Words of what should
And what shouldn't.
Peace
Love
Happiness
Words of what we feel
Not how we act.
Hatred
War
Pain
Words that show our anger
And our bloodthristyness
Unfair
Unjust
Uneven
Words on how society works
And how it will always be
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A contest entry
- What's the most recent poem you've written by Tqop.
700 points, ended September 10, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow! You have such a strong point of view. thank you for entering, and for sharing.
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so true
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this is excellent! and its so true. i love it!
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Excellent work here
The world is the childrens playground
it holds magic and pain
To embrace it and bring happiness to ones soul
you often learnt o play the game
Time passes and the body grows
often with the young what direction to take we dont know
But deep within we know what love is
and to find love from others first we have to feel it within
You have a great poem here and truth rings true in your words here
Title excellent in its simplicity A+
STYLE purfection at its best
Muse truth and how as our minds grow we find ourselves
Bravo on this piece
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it is a very good poem
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Very well stated.
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omg mac this is amazing
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Wow...
This has definately left me speechless...
It's taken me 5 minutes just to think of something to write...
This is amazing. I love it.
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Thanks
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