If you were more vitriolic I could understand
The intensity with which you disregard
Emotional scrawling by candlelight and hand,
But you seem so sweet, make it so hard.
I can't shout, quietude is silent bliss,
I feel like an edifice with no hope left, decomposing into your eyeliner abyss.
A contest entry
- Rage Surges Through My Veins; by xxRainbowDawnxx.
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Comments
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I really enjoyed this one! Thanks for finding me and sharing with me. Sorry it took me a while to read your writings. I like your choice and flow of words. It is short, but straight to the point. It reminds me of someone I was talking with just this evening. And yes I am doing okay thanks for asking and I hope you are too.
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This reminds me a little of one of my kind of friends, who doesn't seem to deal with the fact that what he says can offend you, he doesn't deal with emotions well and he just disregards everyone elses. It really bugs me when people do this, I accept people are different so so should they.
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