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Tarja and the ocean

There Tarja lays in the light of the moon
The heaveanly light beams down upon the earth
It glides over her smiling face
With her eyes connecting the stars like dots
In the outline of this dots stand a figure
The sand between her toes itches like sandpaper
The wind howls threw her hair
The water roughly slames against the rocks
Wave on wave pours to the muddy suface
The water rides between her sandy toes
She walks along the shore 
only leaving traces of her appearence at the beach
Her foot prints is what she leaves behind

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  • carebear123
    September 7
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    ohhh i love the end
    hehe thats my fav part
    <3