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Steel Quiet

There are no tears.
There is no blood.
There are no words...
There. Is. Nothing.

I'm trapped.

My lips are shut with poison stitches,
And I am bound by ropes of steel quiet.
Longing to scream, I open my mouth...
reaching, begging, silently pleading.

They do not see,
Nor do they care.
They are the trap.
They could set me free.
All they have to do is

Listen.

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For contest "It's time to be inspired": Prompt #5

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Rainbow
Quote Prompt #4

Sticks and Stones may break you bones,
Aimed with angry art.
Words can sting like anything,
But silence breaks the heart.

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  • This seems like a VERY bad dreams I've once experienced! I like the intesity

  • wow blew me away...such powerful words really good job


  • metal4ever
    May 26
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    really great job on this, keep it up (Y)

  • Good, except the exclamation point detracts from the poem. I can really feel the emotion.

  • Awesome job. Wouldn't it be nice for someone to just listen? It's good to scream everything out. I like your write a lot, Good job. Thank you for entering

  • Love it. Very nicely written ! :]

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